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Chapter 1 - The Name On The Concrete

The neon beer signs cast a faint amber haze over Nicholas Valenti’s chiseled jawline.

He stood beside our wooden booth with both hands resting loosely in the pockets of his tailored trousers.

The air between us seemed to thicken, heavy with the sudden realization of who held my scribbled napkin.

"I am that Nicholas Valenti," he answered, his voice dropping into a calm, unbothered cadence.

"Does that disqualify me from rule number one?"

I swallowed hard, looking down at the damp table where the cocktail napkin sat between two half-empty pint glasses.

"Rule number one is about keeping promises," I murmured, feeling the heat rise into my cheeks.

"I don't break promises, Mara," he said smoothly.

"Breaking promises is bad for business."

Before I could process how casually he used my first name, Jolene pushed her way through the crowded bar.

She was tucking her lipstick into her purse, completely oblivious to the man towering over our booth.

"Okay, the line for the bathroom was insane, but I heard some guy—" Jolene froze mid-stride.

Her eyes darted from Nicholas's charcoal jacket to the faint scar cutting through his left eyebrow.

Every trace of drunken bravado drained from her face in an instant.

"Mr. Valenti," Jolene whispered, her posture stiffening like a recruit before a drill sergeant.

Nicholas turned his dark eyes toward her, giving a slight, courteous nod.

"Miss Carter," Nicholas said respectfully. "Your father’s cabinet shop on East 6th does exceptional restoration woodwork."

"Tell him the mahogany paneling he installed at the Driskill Hotel bar looks remarkable."

Jolene blinked in utter astonishment, clutching her handbag against her ribs.

"You... you know my dad?"

"I know everyone in Austin who works with honest hands," Nicholas replied, shifting his gaze back to me.

"And I know Mara restores antique instruments in a workshop behind her grandmother’s house on Hyde Park."

My breath caught in my throat.

"You've been tracking me?" I asked, my voice laced with sudden caution.

Nicholas pulled a polished silver lighter from his pocket, turning it over in his long, calloused fingers.

"A month ago, Colton Avery approached my lending group for a four-million-dollar commercial mezzanine loan," Nicholas explained.

"He wanted to finance his downtown boutique hotel venture."

"Standard due diligence requires my security team to inspect the character, debts, and commitments of every borrower."

He stepped half an inch closer, his deep voice meant only for my ears.

"Two weeks ago, Avery removed your name from the corporate partnership filings."

"He told my loan committee that he needed an alliance with Vanessa Sterling’s family trust to secure municipal zoning."

"He traded you away to qualify for my bank's credit facility."

A cold, sickening weight dropped into the pit of my stomach.

Colton hadn't just gotten cold feet; he had calculated my replacement like an itemized tax deduction.

"Did you give him the loan?" I asked, looking straight into Nicholas's flint-colored eyes.

Nicholas smiled—a slow, lethal curve of his lips that sent a shiver straight down my spine.

"I do not lend capital to men who break their foundations before pouring the concrete."

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"I denied his application yesterday morning at nine o'clock."

"And tomorrow morning, Mara, I believe Colton Avery is going to realize that some debts cannot be refinanced."

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