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Chapter 2 - Attention on Deck

The mess hall plummeted into a vacuum of total silence. You could hear the faint drip of melted ice from the soda dispenser fifty yards away. Over three hundred sailors, from newly arrived recruits to seasoned master chiefs, dropped their utensils onto plastic trays in unison.

"Ten-hut!"

The bellow came from a boatswain's mate near the tray return line, his vocal cords vibrating with sheer instinct. In less than half a second, the scrape of three hundred chairs rose like a wave across the cavernous room. Every single uniform snapped to the position of attention—heels together, fingers curled along the trouser seams, eyes staring straight ahead into the blank air.

Jake Thompson was still half-bent over my table, my thumb holding his wrist in a gentle, unbreakable vise. When Captain Harris’s boots struck the floor in rapid, furious strides, Jake finally felt the icy reality crashing through his skull. He tried to pull away, but his legs were shaking so violently that he nearly dragged my tray off the laminate.

I released his pressure point with a subtle flick of my wrist. Jake stumbled back against Ethan and Marcus, clutching his tingling hand to his chest as if he had touched live wire.

Captain Harris arrived at the perimeter of our table, his face flushed purple with a dangerous cocktail of fury and embarrassment. But he didn't look at Jake. He didn't look at the three terrified recruits trembling behind him. He stopped two paces from my chair, clicked his combat boots together, and snapped a textbook salute directly at my eye level.

"Commander Mitchell," Captain Harris barked, his voice vibrating through the silent dining room. "My deepest apologies for the disturbance during your breakfast."

Jake’s jaw dropped open. His eyes darted to my rank insignia—the silver lieutenant bars pinned to my collar that everyone assumed were supply corps badges. Commander?

Beside Captain Harris stepped Admiral Vance, commander of Naval Special Warfare Command. He looked down at my tray, noting the half-eaten scrambled eggs and the paper cup of black coffee, then let out a low, rueful chuckle that cut through the agonizing tension.

"Still eating the standard galley slop, Sarah?" Admiral Vance asked, resting his hands on his belt. "I offered you the flag mess in the briefing wing."

I pushed my tray back, stood up with steady grace, and returned the salute with crisp, surgical precision. "Standard galley builds character, Admiral. Besides, the inventory here is remarkably lively this morning."

Jake looked like he was about to vomit. Ethan’s knees were visibly wobbling, while Marcus looked as though he wished the tile floor would open up and swallow him whole.

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"Sir..." Jake stammered, his voice pitched an octave higher than normal, desperate to explain himself. "I... we didn't know... she wasn't wearing..."

Admiral Vance turned his gaze toward the four boys, his eyes narrowing into cold slits of ice. "You spoke without being recognized, Seaman Recruit. Close your mouth before I have Master Chief Miller run you until your lungs collapse on the tarmac."

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